The camera work is sub-par and bland. The editing has some nice tricks, but is jarring in most cases. The writing is pretty shallow, with a fairly thin storyline. What's with all of the ad-libbing? Trust a well-written script. I've seen this kind of film, but ultimately execution is everything. This is mediocre execution at best. I admired some of the thematic dilemmas the characters face. I found some of the language distracting at times. I'm all for strategic use of profanity, but this was bordering on excessive. This is purely constructive criticism, I hope you may not take this to heart, as that's how us filmmakers improve from project to project.

We loved it! Great work!